
‘I’m going to start with this beautiful film,’ a presenter informs the audience.
The killer in this sentence is the word beautiful.
The minute you use an adjective* to describe something your audience is going to experience:
• You’re creating an expectation that may not be met because everyone has different notions of what defines beauty.
• The churlish people in the audience (and yes, there will always be a couple), half-risen hackles will spring to attention
• And most people want to make up their own minds. They don’t want to be told what to think or feel
A more inclusive way of presenting the film would be to say, ‘I want to share this film. I then invite your comments and observations’.
Your audience will probably find the film beautiful. (If you have good taste, I’m sure you do!).
This sounds like a subtle play on words, but it’s powerful. This change ensures that the experience is beautiful. Not because you said so, but because your audience discovered it for themselves.
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*What could work is using a qualifier like time – ‘A short film or a 30-second film’.

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